Damn the life
What the hell do u think can prove
so lots of things to improve
what on earth makes u
think that u can actually think
yes i m allergic to bullshit
whats your father's goes if i m sick
help yourself rubbing some ice on the red mark
on your arse
you think things gonna change and work
i tell u life will pin u on a fork
still u say life is beautiful
damn u
life sucks
and sucking rocks \m/
(i don't mean this poem literally...but frustrated at times..when things don't work..)
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
10 comments:
though the poem is lengthy, it is worth it... the ideas have been conveyed without any confusion... i guess the wordings could have been improved further...
It's a very nice poem and it worths in everyones life........
thora rhyming with a pinch of rap...dal de hum log is apne band ka cover song bana denge it will be top on the charts... do one thing write 4,5 frustoo songs more...we will have a album, anyway nice job keep it up:)hi hi ha ha
kamal are u serious???
it just needs nothing more.....d reader needs to have a brain above his shoulders to get it....
Well Well.. check my points below:-
1)Don't write short notifications and use jargon, while writing blogs.
2) Life is really beautiful and up-downs are the two sides of it.so wait for your turn to come and keep going with your actions, you'll definitely get chance to relish.. :)
3)Last but not the list: - To get out these frustrations - change the way you think always; as all are not equally incorporated ! Else you'll be loosing all,that you want.
All the best dear ..:)
are u god damn sure dat it is a poem....
if yes den god bless u bt please...
btr u write blogs, u r a gud blogger...
i hav tried for 10 mins to giv a music to dis bt i failed....
and yes please change the last line it has dual meaning. i doubt wat u exactly mean........
any ways nice tried....
plz soon na javed akhtAR KI MAAA EK ACHA SA SONG LIKH NA,,,BASED ON MONSTERS ,WEREWOLF EK GANA COMPOSE KARNA HAIN,,,EK SONG PE EK ICECREAM BILCUL MUFT ,,SERIOUSLY KOI BHI EK SONG LIKH KAR POST KAR NA ,," I NEED IT" MERA ENGLISH POORA ZERO HAI TAT'S WHY...MEIN JANTA HOON TOO NAHI LIKHAEGHI KI KANJOOS :(
best line!!! wats ur father goes!!!!
:)
Post a Comment